the enchanter

Okay! I realized that the last journal I posted (journal #3) is a pathetically horribly unstimulating barren bore....

Just to give you an idea as to how to help me...here's the criteria for thr journal responses that my teacher handed out.

C O N T E N T
1. Did the entires avoid plot-summary?
1 2 3 4

2.Did the entires demonstrate depth? Did they go beyond superficial evaluation such as: "I find the story interesting/boring/weird"?
1 2 3 4

3. Did the entires communicate thoughts and feelings with clarity?
1 2 3 4

4. Did you provice a convincing ratoinale for your choice of significant passages?
1 2 3 4

5. Did journals demonsrate a familiarity with literay technique & conventions e.g. theme, plot, characterization, symbolism, figures of speech?
1 2 3 4

6. Did you provide a thoughtful answer for each of your discussion questions?
1 2 3 4

F O R M
7. Grammar, spelling, punctuation & diction
1 2 3 4

8. Title page / Word-processed / Neatness of presentation / Entries titled & dated
1 2 3 4

1 = 50-59% = D
2 = 60-69% = C
3 = 70-79% = B
4 = 80-89% = A

WHEW*panting*.. so now you have a marking scheme.. GO RATE 'EM!

This whole thing is too stressful for me.. :( especially thinking the deadline is tomorrow.. yeah.. I might commit suicide just THIS AFTERNOON! so.. be good to me okay.. *throws her body on the bed and sobs uncontrollably in self-pity*